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My Little Angels


My little angels from above
each day they test my strength
I give to them all my love
my endurance is without length

Loghan, Jor'Jianna, and my Avery boy
little tornadoes they seem to be
though tired from all the chaos and joy
they make me feel younger and free

Each night, after bathing it's off to bed
A goodnight story or maybe a song
after asleep a kiss for each little head
how could this ever be wrong

My little angels sent from above
God's shared them with me to love

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  • CoolQeen
    November 7
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    What a lovely poem! I really like it!!


  • songstress80
    November 7

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    wonderful job! we mothers love our children even if they drive us crazy. they can be little angels and little imps. either way, we love them nonetheless, unconditionally. we do our best to be good mothers---reading or singing them to sleep, even though sometimes it drives us crazy to read or sing the same thing over and over and over again. not all mothers have much patience. sometimes mine is thin but i do try to keep it good. keep up the good work of being a good and patient mother. lovely job! great write!

    good luck in the contest! thank you very much for entering!


  • Vampress Alayna silver member
    November 7
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    Well done