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I don't know you anymore

we had memories once
distinct moments in time
our close friendship had secrets whispered
while heads laid on pillows
lulling themselves to sleep

lately
things are...
different

we are so close,
yet so far

we can remember the younger faces
and the mindset behind them


older and wiser becomes the mystery

intriguing, disturbing

I knew you once
in this way,
at that point
I thought friendship meant forever

I walk away
so do you

I try to talk
but there's nothing to say

up and out
could mean so much

with you and I
it only screams loss

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