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Dear My Love

I wrote you a letter today
It said I was going away
For a while.
I'll be back in a little while,
If I ever return.

I threw out that letter today
And started to drift away
Into my own world
Where I'm a little girl;
Too young to understand
This.

Dear my love
Are you there?
Can you hear me?
In the night
I lie next to you
But do you lie next to me?

Three years pass me by
And not a day goes by that I
Forget you're gone.
Why are you gone?
Will you come back?

The years crawl by.
I try to look ahead but my eyes
Block out the light.
I can't see the light,
If one even
Exists.

Dear my love
Are you there?
Can you hear me?
In the night
I lie next to you
But do you lie next to me?

I wrote you a letter today
It said I was going away
For a while.
I won't be home for a little while,
No I don't think I'm coming home.

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  • Ah..this is something very crying and very moving truth of the heart you have shared through the deep words..love it..very thoughtful and wonderful work..thank you so much...