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Life Maker

Life is a miracle that has been given to you

Love is not only for a minute, but so many more

Touching, holding, protecting that which gives us hope

Faith and Love, from the beautiful heavens above

I can’t see you, but you keep screaming my name

Places so often taken away, still wanting them to stay

Always craving, but never wanting it to be so untouchable

Determined to find proof, just seeking the truth

Can’t wait for the rain to fall upon, and touch me

Watching ever so closely, maybe you will see the fear

Never listening, not wanting to hear what you cannot feel

Life Maker, life Taker, this soul is not to be replaced

Life is a miracle that can be taken from you

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