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See What The Heart Sees

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How precious are all the children throughout this world

born of innocence to be raised with our tender love.
Climbing up onto their parents lap, all snuggled and curled,
which was God's plan in the beginning through creation from above.

Everyone has a story and many are so very sad,
they are just heartbreaking and truly make me mad.
Some children grow up and some never do,
just depends on how willing they are to see life through.

Parental trauma to a child is the worse form of abuse,
many disassociate in order to survive a God given excuse.
But when grown the inner child that is so wounded deep within,
must go back to their precious wounded self with help to begin.

Healing can take place no matter how old you may be,
with fellowship filled with love and trust you will truly be set free.
Allowing yourself to be totally you is so beautiful to me,
being one of those children I'm now able to see what the heart sees.

Written by: Kelle Marie Stavron
November 6, 2009

 

 

 

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    November 8

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    Kellie Marie
    Your poem breathes gold to the touch
    Such a profound write and deep emotional read
    Wishing you all the best hun

    Julie


  • Talking Toni gold member
    November 8

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    Lovely Kelle....

    Yet such a sad and growing fact of life. When I was at the Jeremy Camp concert a few weeks ago, Natalie Grant opened for him and sang a song called Greater things are yet to come...not sure if you have heard it or not, but she said the original group who wrote and sang the song was touring in Tokiyo. Well they were trying to find a place that would let them share their music and witness the love of God and the only place that would let them was a bar..So they went on in and set up and started singing. While they were singing this particluar song they looked down in front of them and there were these girls lined up from ages 7 to 11 or 12. And men were coming in off of the street buying these children!!! They were just stunned and the band leader said they almost stopped singing. Crying to God in his mind saying how can thid be happening here we are spreading the truth of your love to these people and THIS is happening right in front of us. He the heard God speak to him saying this ..."I am here I see their tears and feel their pain, but I see what you don't see, I see their hope and their freedom as well. so take heart...I have a plan and am not blind to thier oppression." It made me think of you and your situation Kelle...I cried at that concert so much because it touched down on may things in this life and I prayed for your healing right there and ask God to please send relief to you!!!! I know this was long, but your poem amde me remember that night at the concert!!! This was an incredible outpouring from your heart once more!!!~~~~Toni~~~~

  • goalsv
    November 7

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    Such a beautiful look into life and the look at the child. If we all had theat child like love and realism the world would be a better place. Such a rhythem and flow as you read.


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    November 7
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    This is beautifully touching, sweet soul
    You've made my heart cry today...
    May God bless you,
    Sandy


  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 7

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    Amen honey

    So many children stay with parents that abuse for all they want from them is love and even though abused they love them so . Trying every way they can to make them proud only the child doesnt realize no matter what they do will it ever change as long as they remain there . Young people so needs to let their voice be heard about their abuse and the world will rally to their side . My heart goes out to each and every one and should a child feel lost in what to do they should go outside the home to athorities and churches to get the help they so need and deserve .Great write here honey and bless your heart .


  • Massacringchainsaw
    November 6
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    very very moving i really like the religious out look in the poem

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