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My Final Love Song

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So many times, in your blue eyes, I’ve been forced to watch my demise
The burn begins to bleed, the sting begins to swell—
My heart’s been raped and thrown down an empty well
It’s all a simple because; blame my soul for falling in love
My soul’s finding its grave, my heart’s too gone to save
I thought you were my love to be true—
All I had ever wanted was to die loving you

I thought you were my loving tear of hope—
My life’s final wish, my song’s final note
So depressing, I’m simply too sad to care
My everything, you left me so heartbroken and bare
I’m begging for this to have turned out any other way
All I had ever wanted was to be in your arms at the end of the day

All I ever wanted was something I cannot explain
The angel I believed to be worth the tears and the pain
All I ever wanted was the key to promise our love true
All I had ever wanted, all I had ever wanted was you

You’re so far away, my only happiness; you’re so far gone
All that I cry, all that I bleed—
The road of loneliness has never seemed so long
Never did I think to cry, only to find you gone
Never in your heart, did I cry for death and sing this lonely song
You just had to go, now there is something you must know…

All I ever wanted was something I cannot explain
The angel I believed to be worth the tears and the pain
All I ever wanted was the key to promise our love true
All I had ever wanted, all I had ever wanted was you

All I ever wanted was something I cannot explain
The angel I believed to be worth the tears and the pain
All I ever wanted was the key to promise our love true
All I had ever wanted, all I had ever wanted was…

Was you




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The tenth and final piece in "The Lonely Decease"

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  • This was really touching.
    The rythme was nice and smooth,
    great work, but can only expect that from you
    Favorite line "My heart's been raped and thrown down an empty well"
    Great write


    • Inspired By Till
      November 9
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      Thank you very much You're like my favorite author on this place, so it always means a lot for you to approve---it's like a badge of honor

      • Dearly Beloved...
        November 10
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        Sweetness :] and thanks
        Your a very respectable writter yourself; hard to find these days :I
        again, great write, *really* moving

  • Great work. As usual, you have used a great ryhme scheme. All of the words really fell into place, besides a few minor snags, but they're nothing to really bother with because they don't distract at all from this work. Sorry to hear that you're leaving AP, keep writing Comrade.

    • Inspired By Till
      November 9
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      Sweet, thanks man Yeah, have one more album to put out then I'm gone. I just remembered something; I was in one of your contests about shock value a WHILE back


  • Syko Path
    November 9
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    i really like this
    and i read what you and that guy were saying to each other on my poem "listen"

    and i totally agree with you

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