So many times, in your blue eyes, Ive been forced to watch my demise
The burn begins to bleed, the sting begins to swell
My hearts been raped and thrown down an empty well
Its all a simple because; blame my soul for falling in love
My souls finding its grave, my hearts too gone to save
I thought you were my love to be true
All I had ever wanted was to die loving you
I thought you were my loving tear of hope
My lifes final wish, my songs final note
So depressing, Im simply too sad to care
My everything, you left me so heartbroken and bare
Im begging for this to have turned out any other way
All I had ever wanted was to be in your arms at the end of the day
All I ever wanted was something I cannot explain
The angel I believed to be worth the tears and the pain
All I ever wanted was the key to promise our love true
All I had ever wanted, all I had ever wanted was you
Youre so far away, my only happiness; youre so far gone
All that I cry, all that I bleed
The road of loneliness has never seemed so long
Never did I think to cry, only to find you gone
Never in your heart, did I cry for death and sing this lonely song
You just had to go, now there is something you must know
All I ever wanted was something I cannot explain
The angel I believed to be worth the tears and the pain
All I ever wanted was the key to promise our love true
All I had ever wanted, all I had ever wanted was you
All I ever wanted was something I cannot explain
The angel I believed to be worth the tears and the pain
All I ever wanted was the key to promise our love true
All I had ever wanted, all I had ever wanted was
Was you
Author notes
The tenth and final piece in "The Lonely Decease"
What did you think
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This was really touching.
The rythme was nice and smooth,
great work, but can only expect that from you
Favorite line "My heart's been raped and thrown down an empty well"
Great write


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Thank you very much
You're like my favorite author on this place, so it always means a lot for you to approve---it's like a badge of honor
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Sweetness :] and thanks
Your a very respectable writter yourself; hard to find these days :I
again, great write, *really* moving
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Great work. As usual, you have used a great ryhme scheme. All of the words really fell into place, besides a few minor snags, but they're nothing to really bother with because they don't distract at all from this work. Sorry to hear that you're leaving AP, keep writing Comrade.
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Sweet, thanks man
Yeah, have one more album to put out then I'm gone. I just remembered something; I was in one of your contests about shock value a WHILE back
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i really like this

and i read what you and that guy were saying to each other on my poem "listen"
and i totally agree with you

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Shhweet! I got Syko's support on it, no I can go to war! Thanks
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