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Enough for more...

Savory moments,
arousing aromas
all over flow
drifting out the windows
out across the road
Table laden with every delight
m - mmm
the turkey and stuffing
all cooked just right.
Come one and all
there is more than
enough to eat your fill
this thanksgiving night!
Come share our meal.

Author notes

Growing up we always set the table extra for both neighbors and strangers alike.

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  • Arkbear gold member
    November 7

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    Yes.....sharing a meal is the biggest gift we can give for the season of Thanks.....thank you for sharing this with me and the contest.....I was touched, even as short as your write was....good luck with your entry!

     

    God bless,

     

    Bear -


    • guardianhost gold member
      November 7
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      Awesome comment on my poem! Thank you!!!

      I am glad you enjoyed reading me, Holidays and meals are the absolute best !!!!!
      Sharing with Family & Friends & Neighborhood folks.
      Happy Holidays Bear!
      Sincerely,
      Cheryl


  • ShaShay
    November 7
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    Compact and fits well. Thank you for taking time to enter. Best of luck.
    Sharon

    • guardianhost gold member
      November 7
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      Thank you for reading me , I love the holidays, sharing with family, friends and neighbors

      Strangers that need a bite to eat and working down with the local retreat.
      Heres hoping you enjoy the holidays,
      Sincerely,
      Cheryl

  • fanniesson
    November 7
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    fast moving
    and well to the point
    liked piece


  • rbruce gold member
    November 7

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    Well done. A short simple poem which says all that is needed for the occasion. Sorry, but you have an'm' tacked onto ' delight' Simple typo.

    • guardianhost gold member
      November 7
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      Thank you my dear Friend....

      I wrote it in haste, m-mmm , I am looking forward to the taste of the holidays for sure! Thank you again for reading and commenting on me , it is awesome to hear from you again.
      All the Best,
      Cheryl

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