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A Lovers Cocoon

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Passions dancing within our eyes

as we stripped the color from the moon

Wind blown hair against starlit skies

your breathing becomes a lovers tune


Thirst is quenched between the thighs

and legs become a lovers cocoon

Intimate moments bring heated cries

as tongues become the passions spoon


Teasing the spot that brings pleasure

curving in and behind the buds core

Arching of back is a sight to treasure

and hazel eyes are begging for more


You etched your name upon her breast

as you devoured, every inch of skin

The moon ducked out to have a rest

and the morning sun came rushing in


Peak of intensity called out to the wild

as voices of passion sang to the skies

The moon had tired when they were riled

and ecstasy's shimmer kissed the sunrise


Tenderly kissing after the earth shook

they remained entwined with desire

Slow grinding against her running brook

revealed that these lovers weren't soon to retire


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Prompt: We loved until the Moon tired

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 7
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    oh my i am blushing this is a delightfully naughty poem thank you for this nugget


  • azlyn gold member
    November 7

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    Delicious...tender and so enticing...Sweet Lady...how you touch my soul.



    Love you so...

    Azzie


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 7

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    This is so very sweet and hot. I loved every line of this, it makes me feel warm for some reason. You are just on a roll girl good luck in the contest SH


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 7

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    As long as lovers use their eyes
    The Moon will shine on lover's trysts
    Her silver touch a sweet surprise
    While love exists

    As long as you can touch the skies
    Her face will penetrate the mists
    In tender thoughts and softer sighs
    True love exists

    The Moon grew tired, that must be lies
    The Moon is love I must insist
    She will not tire while our strong ties
    Of love exist




    Beautiful love poem



    Love

    Jeff


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 7

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    WHEEEEEEEEEEW!!

    Great goodness, this is a blazer! damn outlasted the moon huh? wow l.o.l.
    you have many great lines so if i wanted to quote them it would have to be THE ENTIRE WRITE! superbly done my friend..


  • Griswold gold member
    November 7

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    Wonderfully done sweetheart, you always bring the sensual heat baby and this is no exception to that rule. Very well written my love, best of luck... I love you... Scott


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 6

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    I do believe the moon was pleasantly exhausted and propositioned Mars for a quickie above the brook of Passion.

    wonderfully done pen, truly Tory

    love it, and you



    Len

  • mcfreeman
    November 6
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    The moon and the running brook

    thus it has always been....

  • wow
    this was an amazing write.
    This had a great imagery to it.
    You're an amazing poem. Hope
    to read more soon.

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