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Love Me To Life

 

Take an ember from your heart and melt the frozen wall from mine

 From your lips give me breath and pass it into my lungs with a kiss

Awaken me from my deepest sleep so I shall know the prince in my dreams is real

It is only you who knows the secret of the embedded code to my love

You that lights the windows of my soul lifting the shaded veil

The music which my heart dances to as it welcomes life,

is music whispered from your lips into my ear

I see when you look at me

I feel as you touch me

Taste when you kiss me

and breathe when you exhale

You awaken me

your love brings me life

Let me love life back into you

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~All in the Knowing of Love...
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  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 7

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    Absolutely stunning dear
    Rich in imagery and emotions
    The following line is brilliant
    "Let me love life back into you"
    Wish you the best of luck..love & light David


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 7

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    TAste when you kiss me, and breathe when you exhale...Your love brings me to life. Impressive ending to such a wonderful poem! Good luck in my contest. Love the pic by the way!

    Please do not reply back!

    ~Sie


  • xxuglyducklingxx
    November 7

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    Remarkable.

    This is a beautifully composed piece. So passionate and tender....heart warming and heart breaking, soul restoring and soul searing...This is SO amazing. The picture is divine, I think it compliments the tone and flow nicely, to the imagery and the metaphor of itself. :}! I really love your work. !

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