To feel your hand in mine
As I feel your breath slide along the side of my cheek
To feel your heart pounding beneath my ear
As I rest my head upon your chest
Sharing little moments with you
Looking into one another's hearts
Reading each other's souls
Loving me
There is nothing else I want
But to be held by you
It's like feeling soft soft rain
Fall on my face
Feels so right lovin you
It's the comfort of my
Heart
Author notes
Phrase prompt & picture above:
"Roses are Dancing within the flicker of Candlelight
and loving you tonight, feels just right"
A contest entry
- Phrase and Pic Prompt: 10 Poets Only...Lets do this ENDS Tonight when all is filled by PassionsPromise.
900 points, ended November 6, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If you view i will know, please comment.
Comments
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I really enjoyed the peaceful feeling of love that flowed through this write. Fantastic job and very deserving of your shiney! ~gypsy~
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Brilliant penning my beautiful
the format is cool as well the drifting down to a point, to me signifies unity, which is perfect for this piece..stunning choice of words
Congratulations on the Bronze honey
very well deserved
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wooo hooo nice indeed baby u sneeked this is with out me knowing but i watch all and what a ripper congtrats on bronze so deserved mwaaa xo glenn
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Congrats on the bronze mom. This is very pretty and i'm glad you got a trophy for it. Keep on penning for you do a lovely write. Have a nice evening. Hugs and love to you,
Sam I Am
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oh just lovely
Thank you for this entry
and good luck hon
Passionspromise
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Thank you..
It was your quote that inspired me..
s
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