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I Am All Alone.....

Someone come save me
I am afraid of this darkness
That keeps surrounding me
I can't see anything

No friend to call my own
No hand to lean
No shoulder to cry on
I'm alone in this cold world
I call my home

I can't feel your touch
I can't hear your voice
I am all alone in
This lonely world

I'm sitting here in my room
Crying in this darkness
Wishing you could save me
From all this misery...

I can't take anymore
I'm losing hope
I'm losing strength
I feel so alone
In this world
I call my home

Someone save me
I'm afriad of this darkness
That keeps on surrounding me..
I'm all alone tonight
No one can stop these tears I cry....

I am alone with a broken heart

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  • Eyes-of-a-tragedy
    November 27
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    Dark

    I love it, it reminds me of some of my old work. It's very deep and very true. It's a shame people feel this way but hey that's life. Great write

  • MoonlightStars gold member
    November 13

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    fantastic piece as always. Especially enjoyed the fourth stanza


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 7

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    "Someone come save me" *Comes and saves you* I'm always here for you my friend. "No friend to call my own
    No hand to lean
    No shoulder to cry on
    I'm alone in this cold world" I'm your friend and that will never change "I am alone with a broken heart" I'm always here if you want to talk. I hope things look up. The poem was really well written and expressed your emotions exquisitely.




    -Steve-


  • Starme
    November 7
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    Aww, this is sad., what happen. Hope you feel better

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