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''Will You Help Me Ophelia?''

Drench in my own sweat
I breathe a slient ''O''
Frost speading on the window glass like fire
A girl with winter blue skin, dark royal blue lips, clear blye eyes, and snow white fair hair
Holding her winter blue hand out to me
She whisper so softly i could barely hear "will you help me Ophelia?

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  • Syko Path
    November 9
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    i love it my sexy hoe!