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Fifth Grade

Over and over and over again,
Pill after pill after pill.
I keep wishing for my death,
I’ve taken so much I feel ill.

Over and over and over again,
Tear after tear after tear,
Death keeps knocking on my door,
But I’m too caught up in fear.

Time after time after time after time,
Cut after cut after cut.
The blood that flows down my arm,
The doors to my heart are shut.

Time after time after time after time,
Fast after fast after fast.
My body’s so ugly it’s making me sick,
This time I know it will last.

Day after day after day after day,
Name after name after name.
Fat ass, stupid, easy slut,
They laugh like it’s all just a game.

Day after day after day after day,
Kick after punch after smack.
They think they know I won’t put up a fight,
I wait till they turn they’re back.

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  • Vampyrecutter
    November 10

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    This is really good. I can relate to the cutting i constantly cut and i can relate to the name calling im constantly being called names. but this is really good. good job.