Fly my naked heart
unto the fluttering crest of her kisses,
so utterly spellbound and left breathless,
aloft by her puckered wings
on a gently soft glide,
over a tangential sea
in enchanted dreams.
Oh what charmed caresses
that stirs within my cocoon
until that precious press of lips
lifts me to feel so featherweight
and slowly ride along her embrace
where the feel of that exquisite touch,
mesmerized and entranced,
while her love flows through me,
becomes a fairy dust magical sway
before being carried beyond any cares.
Blissfully on an endless soar into a land
of fantasy vibrant visions,
which she makes come true.
Author notes
"A kiss just a kiss ,until you kiss a Butterfly Fairy..... "
Picture and quote by: Amanda Norton
A contest entry
- ஜ Let MY Drawing Inspire YOU ஜ by Jade.Butterfly.
1800 points, ended November 8, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderfully written
Exceptional! Its the most beautiful poetry I've heard for a very long while! Exceptional!Exceptional! I absolutely loved it!!
Keep on writing!!
Warrior


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Exceptional
The wealth of imagery and depth in this poem honored the prompt and engaged the quote perfectly, This is an exceptional poem. Well done,
Cheryl

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*sighs*
No wonder they call you the king of vocabulary!!
I'm just so wowed right now!!
Very beautiful and spectacular indeed!!
Im left with nothing else to say.. i just keep sighing.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Mandi
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So very beautiful and a lovely write on the prompt
Poetic words of love are so rare these days and you and written a precious one. Best wishes in this contest


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This is a lovely interpretation of the picture prompt, Poet. Butterflies do often inspire poetry, it seems. A tender and soft penning it is, as well. Good luck in the contest.



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Excellent penning!!!
Brilliantly romantic and charming with vibrant fantasy imagery,,stunning take on mandi's sketch..i know she will love this as much as I..wish you the best
david


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this is effortlessly beautiful and romantic mate



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