Dear WhoeverItWasThatKissedMe,
My lips are still tingling,
From yesterday,
In the place that you kisssed me.
My heart beat so hard agaist my ribs,
I thought they would burst,
But it was such a gorgeus feeling.
The sun suddenly broke through the clouds,
And lit up my whole day,
And the world went into slow motion.
It was like I was falling before and I didn't even know,
But you grabbed me,
Before I could hit the ground.
I wish I could describe it,
But anything I say,
Would barely compare to that feeling.
I didn't even give you anything in return,
Except for a shocked smile,
That was stuck on my blushing face.
But what could I have given you?
Even the North Star,
Wouldn't have been a good enough gift.
I'm smiling as I think about it,
But there was only one problem with your kiss...
YOU HAD EATEN GARLIC FOR LUNCH!!!!!
22/10/09
Author notes
I've actually never kissed someone on the lips before that was not in my family.... I'm only 11!
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Epiphany
"YOU HAD EATEN GARLIC FOR LUNCH!!!!! " Reminded of someone ... I learned to love garlic, no vampires! It also has some other properties of passion.
Howard
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You have captured the feeling ever if you are only 11. This is a delightful and cunning write. I love the touch of humor with the ending. Stay sweet.
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This is cute. Wow, you never kissed anyone yet you described it so well? Lol. Odd. But it's all good.
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