I cannot see the moon tonight. My thoughts as dark as the sky.
The rain comes down to flood the streets,
And now my mind.
I lay in my bath of sweat, it drips from my pores.
The wind howles eckos off the walls.
I can taste my pain as the water pulls it from my body.
I drown, I wake to the bubbles gone, the water cold.
Just a dream, and I pain again but I am breathing.
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Taking a bath thinking about what would happen if I fell asleep?
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well you would probably drown...just being sarcastic lol. I liked this because it really makes you think. Great job!
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i know the feeling of..
nearly drowning, trust me it's terrifying, and sadly eniough i've fell asleep a number of times in the bathtub but lucky awoke before i actually did drown.. i can relate to that part but the pain you are in i won't pretend to be able to relate.. yet i am sad for u my friend..
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On days without a silver Moon
A bath is still the place to sleep
I'll contemplate from afternoon
The pleasured that are hot and deep
Your dreams was dark where I feel hope
But in a bath minds drift away
I know you'll find a way to cope
With all the pain of everyday
Thoughtful poetry, but I fall asleep in the bath most days and it doesn't do me any harm
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I think I am a little smaller then u. Its very easy 2 go under for me if my legs are not lock in place.
Thank u for the comment.
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Reminds me of When January cried.
And sounds as though all that you need, is love to dry you with a big fluffy towel.
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