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I Hate You

I can feel the
Pain
In my chest.

I can feel the
Hate
In my eyes.

I can feel my
Love
For you
Drain
Like a sink.

I am so
Upset right now
I can't even think.

My teeth are clenched
My heart is being pinched
And stabbed.

Your friends are laughing
As you
Tell them
About me.

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  • MacyDawn
    November 7
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    It's very powerful.
    And it's very good.
    I unerstand how you feel.
    Good poem.


  • Sweet-Pea7
    November 7
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    : ( El debe morirse una muerte lenta y dolorosa. Eso me haría feliz. : ) Great poem bai.