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One Heart

Candlelight on the walls
your eyes look in mine
I love you

Sipping champain slowly
your hand in mind
you are my world

Your everything I could ever want
you give me strength when I am weak
you are my soul mate

Our hearts are one
your love is all I want
will you marry me


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  • sensualbutterfly
    November 7
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    So sweet. So gentle. So...amazing! Beautiful piece you have written here. Beautiful


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    November 7

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    Another beautiful love poem, Robin. Soft and sweet; and even a surprise at the end; a marriage proposal. As always, wonderful work.





  • bunnyslasher157
    November 6

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    This is beautiful. Good job on this.


  • ubercrazygirl gold member
    November 6

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    this is very beautiful.. romantic and breathtaking.. good luck in the contest


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 6

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    Wow,
    now that I didnt see coming
    A marriage proposal
    Just lovely

    Good luck in the contest

    Passionspromise

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