Black nights, eerie quietness lurks
Cat cries in a mournful low tone.
Knife cuts, hard and fast
Rope falls to the floor along side the knife.
Heart is beating, fear its engine
Blood pumps through veins so slow.
Sleep, ha, you will not sleep
Vampires watch, wait to pounce.
Tears you may cry my love
Hate if you will, I care not.
Love will follow, my bite ensures it
Beer is a poor substitute for your blood.
Chains try to hold me from you
Glass cage my prison, not for long.
Ice freezes the panes and they shatter
Rape the idea of keeping me here.
Baby, I am on my way to you
Abuse is not my intent.
Alone you lay on soft satin sheets
Pale skinned on a dark black sheen.
Mirror in the corner shows soft contours
Screams now crack it, screams of fear.
Brother of mine, stay your bite, she is mine
Torture not her soul for it is still free.
Pleasure I will impart to her in time
Beaten she will submit to my charms.
Window opens as if by magic, now is the time
Author notes
I have used all the words in the order they appear, as first word for each sentence.
Please tell me what you think
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black, cat, knife, rope, heart, blood, sleep, vampire, tears, hate, love, beer, chains, glass, ice, rose, rape, baby, abuse, alone, pale, mirror, screams, brother, torture, pleasure, pain, beaten, window
I think your AN's are a tad off....as Rose, Pain & Window are not used as first of Sentences......but no worries....you have followed the Rules and that is what we asked for
-You have a talent for story-telling......I always look for more of a Poetic Tone in Poetry, but this work is good as it stands -
I pondered in many of your L's ( L's = lines )....and that is how you get my attention
Good luck!
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I had used "windo" in my copy of the poem, but it didnt paste when I moved it to AP.
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