belly worms
hide inside
I am nil
butt of breath
whispered
to be two
Please tell me what you think
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So simple, but it is also so genius. This is a good poem...I like it a lot. Short poems are very difficult for most, however that is not the case for you.
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tks
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:: Pokes around at the worms, staying way away from the butt:: Tim.. as usual, I'm stumped, will you explain for me? pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee
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long division...
means i've been long without love
belly worms are like butterflies
I hide inside
believe i am nothing
butt of breath...
when i finally decide to speak i am usually drunk and make an ass of myself
if I could only keep it honest
thus whisper
maybe I could find someone... so "to be two"
but this was very personal so I wouldn't expect anyone to get it -
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Tim, I was wrong, I can't kick myself, because.. I never would of guessed at this. I see it so clearly thanks to you. This is why I say I am a babe in the woods when it comes to poetry, surrounded by the true masters. Wow, how do you do that?? How do you put so much into so few words and not lose one ounce of the emotion??
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and typing can be tenuous
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lol... mostly because I am lazy
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I just thought of 'spread' lol as the word i'd use for this..I have no idea why
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gotta go out dancing darlin'
getting a bit of a "less than a six pack"
so got to work it
maybe see you after on here...
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spread-sheets maybe... lol
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I am your first!! Tim long time no hear or read
and the meaning!! and yes to be two !
love and blessings
Rend
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awe, thanks dollin'
't has been too long
math always was my favorite subject
but
I never was that good at it though... lol
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