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Sharing in Marital Bliss

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Roses deck the stairwell

as candles scent the room

Upon the bed where petals fell

to embrace the bride and groom

~@~~@~~@~

Hair is trimmed he's looking good

she's dressed in silk and lace

He wears a smile that's understood

as brunette curls cascade her face

~@~~@~~@~

Eyes are locked on one another

as movements start the dance

Patience is a mother

fate don't stand a chance

xo

ox

xo

ox

xo

ox

xoxoxoxoxooxxo

xo  xo xo

ox

xo

ox

       Magically they blend in tune

    and hands begin to roam about

    Silhouettes blend with the moon

   and energy bursts from inside out

      ~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~

     Lips are full of want and desire

      and their first time is intense

       Souls are hungry for the fire

while they lose their common sense

      ~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~

             Tongues are playing

               bodies swaying

                          xo

                          xo

                          xo

                          xo

                          xo

                          xo

                          xo

                          xo

         xoxoxoxoxoooxoxoo   Lovemaking nice and slow

                          xo                         ecstasy is riding so close

                          xo                   Beads of passion, a warm glow

                          xo                    drips nicely off his chosen rose

                          xo                     ~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~

                          xo                   Sighs of release become a roar

                          xo                       as the final thrusts hit fast

                          xo                Waves of pleasure shift once more

                                                       and bodies grind to last

                                                   ~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~

                                                             husband and wife

                                                                a promised life

 

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Author notes

I am hosting a contest and this is what i came up with for the prompt.

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    November 7

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    love this expression in form and verse. a beautiful scene illustrated making this husband think back and sweetly smile. nice work.


  • Griswold gold member
    November 7

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    Beautifully done sweetheart, and now I see why you were having such a hard time with the formatting on AP. Thats a prompt? Damn how can that be beat my sweet? Love you baby... Scott


  • glenn shannon silver member
    November 6
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    geez beautiful and loved the cups and all just fine as gal what a ripper


  • JohnnyD gold member
    November 6

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    Darn gal, that is one seriously stunning prompt! more of any males magical mystery tour of what they really desire, but rarely enjoy. Would be impossible for anyone to top that pen Tory, simply utterly perfection of love's desire.

    love ya,

    Len