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Losing Him

He’s falling in love with the wrong girl
While my heart gets more confused
He’s treating her like she’s his world
While I feel hurt and used

I am sick and tired of this pain
Why can we at least be friends
His mixed signals drive me insane
And believe me, there’s no end

One day he’s mean, one day he’s kind
What kind of guy does this??
Cuz he made me laugh, now makes me cry
And it’s the old him I miss

I had him once, for a while
And I guess I took him for granted
Now he’s losing my trust in pure denial
As he enjoys life with her “enchanted”…

wut did ya tink?

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 8

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    It bites to know these feelings. But your last stanza kind of says a lot to me. We may have "had" someone for a while, but that doesn't make them ours, so to speak. It's a lot like the old saying... if you love someone set them free.....

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions, feel free to IM me.
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  • Kira65
    November 8

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    I like it.... it clearly shows emotions and the message you want to get across...
    Your at the age in life where things are confusing.... that one guy is not all there is...
    there are many out there you can't just stop because of one... but oh love can makes us do crazy things... but overall a good write