of them all

simple? nothing worth having is simple.
feeling right though? i think i know that now
talking and laughing,
having friends be in the conversation
staring contests-blinking included
secrets that everyone already knows
only now they mean something
they never did before,
and i thought it was true last time too
until it wasn't

and I'm not sure it's real now either,
but it feels good to just warm up by his body heat on the cold days.

i think that's enough for now

Author notes

new life found finally?

A contest entry

Phrase and Pic Prompt: 10 Poets Only...Lets do this ENDS Tonight when all is filled by PassionsPromise. 900 points, ended November 6, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

what do you think?

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By me, right now

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scars of life911
November 7
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Amazing. I like it! It just needs a few more stanzas and a little more flow! Good write
Kastor
November 6
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You're awesome
This definitely isn't cute. I love it, I love it like potato and biscuit. It's awesome like you.
- black-phenoqu
  November 7
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  well thank you
  you must really like potatoes and biscuits
- - Kastor
    November 8
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    Yes, potato and biscuit make all my favorites. My buddy my buddy, don't let anyone call your stuff cute anymore.
  - - black-phenoqu
      November 8
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      i had thought my earlier work wasn't "cute" either
      but guess i was wrong
    - - Kastor
        November 8
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        Don't get all emo on me now Maura. You're on a roll here. Keep writing well buddy, I like it.
        
        smile
PassionsPromise
November 6
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nicely penned thank you and good luck to you in the contest

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