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Perfect drug gone Wrong (10-13-09)

Your essence was my high
Your kisses made me fly
Your smile, your eyes....were my heroin
took it straight to tha heart
fuck going through tha veins

Once you left...so many times you did
tha worst withdrawl I had ever been through
you....you were, still are in a sense, my perfect drug
tha one that can make my heart beat fast
or make me take a breath....the last

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