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learning the truth

my world was perfectly flat
before age became issue,
horizons lost edges
time made hours slower

climbing to nowhere
delicately momentous
until falling bones cracked

i would lose my skin in the ocean
shed inhibitions without air

until someone mentioned growing up

all of my world fell off its axis
to simply go round

nowhere became somewhere to hide




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  • Nicolette gold member
    November 7
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    i think your "child-within" is alive and well...keep her that way!!

    ~ Nicolette


  • geckogirl silver member
    November 7

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    never grow up girlfriend, i you just the way you are... I'm with you all they way *hug


  • Pure Thought silver member
    November 6

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    Grow up, who's gotta grow up. Not required I hope.

    Well written


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 6

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    wow, this really says a lot to me, sissy. the last line, "nowhere became somewhere to hide: is profound.
    you make writing seem so easy.it just rolls from your fingertips, doesnt it?
    bravo.....


    • Cannonsfire
      November 6
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      lol I wish I said it did, but sis I just think I think too much is all lol with too much to say sometimes C


  • michael thomas
    November 6

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    Try smoking a funny cigarette. My client, Lacy, owns a landscape business and she brings me a plant and I give her some good Columbian because she is too embarrassed to ask Henry for a buy. She is afraid of getting caught, so I do the buying and she keeps me in exotic plants. She will call me late at night when the need arises and I never say no to her. I have conditioned her to go right to my hiding place and take what she wants. I love her. She will keep me up and my cat tells her when to leave.
    So, come on by, although Australia is a long way to get a hit.

    • Cannonsfire
      November 6
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      lol you know I have never done it ever? it's true, it's never appealed to me, i try to get high on life without anything else, so far so good C

      • Pure Thought silver member
        November 6
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        it doesn't give you a different perspective, just a more detailed and deeper one. For me any way. Some people just laugh lots.

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