loving you makes me feel complete
you complete me in all ways
you make me feel as beautiful
as the roses you give me
your love makes me feel
like there's no evil in the world
like there's nothing that can hurt us
the candles shine upon your face
I see the glimmer in your eyes
we are soulmates
and even though you hate to dance
you take me in your arms
you make me shine
you are the light of my life
we are together
forever as one
soulmates
Author notes
Phrase and Picture Prompt
Use both to pen something full of love and romance...
Phrase prompt & picture above:
"Roses are Dancing within the flicker of Candlelight
and loving you tonight, feels just right"
Picture credit: Stock photo
Phrase credit: Passionspromise
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A contest entry
- Phrase and Pic Prompt: 10 Poets Only...Lets do this ENDS Tonight when all is filled by PassionsPromise.
900 points, ended November 6, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This makes me feel so happy and giddy, it's a great write that brings out the happy in me. These lines though I can especially relate to because it's how I feel about my boyfriend.
"your love makes me feel
like there's no evil in the world
like there's nothing that can hurt us"
Good write and keep them coming
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adorable write hon
words filled with love and romance,,you words makes the feeling of love sound like bliss as it should..heck, i stpped wishing for bliss..a little spark would be nice though..wish you the best in the contest..much luv
David
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lovely,well done
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Very nicely done, full of love and romance as all things should be in this world. i wish you the best of luck in this contest well written ... Scott
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Wonderfully done. Enjoyed this piece thank you and good luck
Passions
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