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Frozen

I


She is frozen,
her heart remains still
as I watch from the comfort of my memories.

She makes me stop in my tracks
with one glance from her innocent eyes,
she disappears my anxiety
with one breath from her divine soul.

The sound of her voice singing in the night
carries for an eternity in the mists of my memory;
never clouding my judgement for one second,
never leaving me exposed to harm.

I am frozen,
in time with her,
my arms outstretched to be with the one I love.




II


She is frozen,
her heart remains still
as he walks the path beside her.

He makes her stop in her tracks
with one promise from his demon lips,
he precludes her anxiety
without ever saying a word..

The sound of her voice not singing,
it will never be singing in his memories;
he clouds her judgement at all times,
he will allow her to come to harm.

He has frozen
her loyalty to others,
his arms are the barriers keeping her from me.

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November 7th 09
1:33am

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  • e m i l y
    November 18
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    She makes me stop in my tracks
    with one glance from her innocent eyes,
    she disappears my anxiety
    with one breath from her divine soul.

    I don't disapprove of this poem at all.
    It was just so fantastic.