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Who's the Monster?

A calling from its depth
Weary eyes wander by
Whispered fears
No one really looking
Never seeing true meaning
This creature they fear
The being they abhor
Was one of them once
Except he made a choice
He decided he could do better
Their eyes burn emerald
They're more monsterous than he

Author notes

I wrote this about a close friend of mine that had gotten into a lot of things that were hurting his life. But he turned it all around only to have his friends hate him. They were angry that he got a better life for himself while they're still rotting.

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  • well im glad that your friend fixed his life but did you write this befor or after he fixed his life?