I'm head over heels for you, I just know it.
I didn't care much for you at first I must admit.
You were there, but not there.
At this point in time I know I just can't bare,
The thought of me without you.
To bad you'll never get a clue.
You always want something you can't have.
I'm right out there in the open and not much to grab.
I'd love to let you now how I feel
But I get the feeling that I will never appeal
To someone who can never hear
My heart pounding when you’re near.
So for now I'll hide my feelings in these words
Hoping that one day you'll know that I'm crushed like a fine powder for you.
And maybe then you'll hear those three words long overdue.
Author notes
I'd love to tell him how I feel, but...
A contest entry
- Words falling on deaf ears. by kamikage.
650 points, ended November 15, 32 entries
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Comments
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good
Good rhythm and rhyme here. As for the emotion, its hard for me to relate. I know you feel unable and hesitant, but I know with a little more elaborate adjectives, you'd hit the nail on the head. good job. -
so true, me loves it!
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I wrote what was on my heart and it turned out better than I thought it would. Thanks for reading it. lol
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