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Stay With Me

Silence is
treachery in its own right;
again I fumble in the dark,
yearning for the scent and touch of you.

Without you, my lips are sewn shut;
instead of trusting, I lock down:
there is nothing more I can give
honestly, if you are not here to take it.

My gut wrenches at the thought of my
everlasting love for you.

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November 7th, 09
12:32am

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  • Virgoan
    November 9
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    A succinct piece. The voice is clear and loud in its brevity. Definitely a finalist.

    This is really a good poem.

    Thanks for sharing.