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Another Night

Words of benevolentness love
Splattered on prehistoric paper
As I drag my pen arcoss the worn out stationary
As an agile candlelight flickers on my desk while I write
The insatiable words of a sensual romance spills onto the page
Only in my mind does this attraction exsist
Another night of aching adoration poured only onto a document

Author notes

"All in the Knowing of Love"

I used every word!
Word Bank:

Love,
pen ,
paper,
roses,
candlelight,
romance, and
sensual.

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  • LovingPhoenix
    November 18

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    Beautifully written! I feel the loneliness wrapped up in romance! Good luck in the contest.


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    November 9

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    I like this. I have never been one to enter contests with word banks for the muse eludes me more often than not. However you have made a wonderfully penned piece here with out batting an eye. Great read. ~gypsy~


  • Nature Song silver member
    November 7

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    Another night by candlelight...pen rolling across the paper filling words from a poets mind! Short by so full of imagery! Good use f the word bank! Good luck in my contest!

    Please do not reply back...

    ~Sie


  • glenn shannon silver member
    November 6

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    very beautiful hun soft and romantic like you love always glenn xo


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    November 6

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    incredible penning hon
    Your word choice is breath-taking creating stunning imagery
    oh my, what a powerful take on the prompt
    should be a shiny..much love my beautiful
    ♥♥♥♥ David


  • ThaliaRose
    November 6
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    very well writting, very passionate ^_^


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 6
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    beautiful..full ofpassion..and emotion

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