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Beauiful Place, Beautiful Silence

Despair engulfs my body,
as I listen to them argue.
Trying to block this all out,
but only the worst memories fill my mind.
With tears swelling up, I wish for silence.
Beautiful Silence.
A place of peace, where I can be free from hurt.
A beautiful place.

When shall this end? When will it be over?
When will there be silence?
The yelling tears me apart.
The fighting breaks me down.
Once again I try and block it out,
but it just becomes louder and more harsh.
With tears swelling up, I wish for silence.
Beautiful silence.
A place of peace, where I can be free from hurt.
A beautiful place.

Far away, a place free of despair.
A beautiful place with beautiful silence.

A contest entry

yes... my biological parents got divorced when I was around 8 i think... it tore me apart listening to them night after night arguing,.. i was supposed to be asleep... but i never was...

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  • Purush
    November 6

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    'The yelling tears me apart.
    The fighting breaks me down.
    Once again I try and block it out,
    but it just becomes louder and more harsh.
    With tears swelling up, I wish for silence.
    Beautiful silence.
    A place of peace, where I can be free from hurt.
    A beautiful place.

    Far away, a place free of despair.
    A beautiful place with beautiful silence.'

    A nicely worded verse with good vocabulary
    that suits the taste of the reader.

    All the best in my contest