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Effervescence



Champagne eyes 
behold the crystalline aura globules 
among the day's  fizz and fermented foundations,
visible like bubbles within every lair and layer
where light filters its prism perspicacity
through epiphany’s cerebral visors.

Like a wine it intoxicates 
with the potent power of profoundness,
suddenly seeing the tethers of creation
string their infusions of energy
between all things living
and the ageless airy sheet
wrapped around the earth.

Beyond its lofty diaphanous lace
the solar fingers reach out to touch its fibers,
it summons the sparklers of starry sagacity
until the cosmic kiss of serenity
writes its lightning upon one’s view,
then in gasp and awe of eclipsing epiphany
the world turns into sea
of constantly swirling revelations.

Ever after sipping upon that nectar
insides drunk on the metaphysical elixir
imbibed as insight’s cocktail,
which makes every second
a visionary happy hour for the mind.

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  • aboomer silver member
    November 13

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    Love the picture - and the write! Wonderful wording gives great visual impact to this.
    Nicely done!

    thank you for your entry
    best wishes in the contest

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 13

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    I loved this piece an interesting poem and picture a tough contest again this week for us to judge thanks for taking the time to eneter best wishes always be well.


  • islekine gold member
    November 13
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    LOL

    I wrote a full comment...honest...
    Now I can't edit the one below...so will repeat...Wonderful entry! I love the title, picture and especially the third stanza! Thanks for your continued support of our contests. Best wishes always!

    and

  • islekine gold member
    November 13

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    I love this...


  • drifting cloud silver member
    November 10

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    Wow! You paint quite a magnificant picture with your talented poetic words. Good luck on BWOW this week.


  • ubercrazygirl gold member
    November 6

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    Once again, you wrapped my mind and soul in your writing. You are amazing and absolutely a pleasure to know.


  • michael thomas gold member
    November 6

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    Like I told Cannonsfire, come on by and take a poke off of my pipe with the funny weed in it. I got a quarter once left, just enough so the cops won't arrest me. Your poem is lovely, actually, and I do not think you need to get wasted to write any better. I need to fly a little before I sleep for the night, so stay home.

    michael

  • LovingPhoenix
    November 6

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    You captured the image, perfectly! Even without the picture, the write is so incredible beautiful! You took my breath away! Good luck in the contest.


  • GotLilt
    November 6
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    Poem and pic are awesome!

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