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For you

My heart is with you,
my soul is with you,
my love is with you.
What more could you want
from a mere school girl who is nothing
like you?

I chase after you when i'm out of breath,
I lie awake in my bed when i should be asleep,
I try more than my best for you realise
someday that I love you.

You're the ladies man,
I'll never stand a chance with you,
but I still try,
then I realise I'm wasting my time,
that the man i need,
is standing next to me.

I spent all those years chasing after you,
and you kept me from realising,
I love the boy who looks at me,
the boy who loves me for who I am.

And I love him to.
I will love him forever.

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  • DarrenShanassistant
    November 7
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    It was good

    I think it was good because it was nice and short.