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My Secrets

My hair is fake
You'd say its weave
My walk is cheap
I copied Steve
I cry at night, I never sleep
The dreams are harsh beyond belief
My mom is lost
But i won't cry
I miss my dad
And thats no lie
But after all i can come to say
My secrets made me strong in the biggest way

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  • ryline bug
    November 6
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    Bravo

    nicee poem, I see you fixed it xD
    Keep up the good work