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Kisses so fine

A drawing to please the mind
One so fine sends me soaring
Devine a kiss  just in time
Before the break of glorious mornings
The butterfairy s Embrace
Hearts race at atn awesome pace
Kiss thy lips
Oh I so miss thee
Flutter by  be thine tonight
Hold on tight
As we take flight
Landing only
To take  a taste of life
For a brief time
One moment in a night
Yet eternal  side by side

Author notes

what a stunning drawing by our contest host Jade,. Butterfly this is for you my dear one .

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  • guardianhost gold member
    November 8

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    Masterful Write

    Your pen flows with a heartfelt prose, for your dearest love shows through for your loving wife Mandi. A beautiful write from your pen once again.
    Well done Glenn, all the best in the contest,
    Cheryl


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    November 7

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    Awe..
    This was soooo sweet!!
    "Hold on tight
    As we take flight
    Landing only
    To take  a taste of life"

    those were my favorite lines
    I loved how you took my artwork and penned me something so brilliant
    as this..
    i'm astounded and speechless..
    Thank you so much for entering and good luck.
    Mandi


  • penman gold member
    November 6
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    excellent

    What a beautiful write. So very well written. you did great with the picture


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 6
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      thanks bro She bieng Mandi has a hidden talent and boy it gets the muse flowing so cheers to her and you for reading peace and light glenn


  • Raining Kisses silver member
    November 6
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    this is a really pretty write glenn...traditonal...classic and awesome
    T


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 6
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      thanks T always a pleasure wen u drop by glad you enjoyed xo love your way

  • LovingPhoenix
    November 6

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    Beautiful poem! I am sure this will be cherished! Love oozes throughout the write!


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 6
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      thanks sweety always appreciate your kind words xo love and light glenn


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 6

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    beautiful piece glenn..... so sweetly dedicated...


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 6

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    A wonderful piece penned for Jade
    I love the picture and the words you painted
    good luck Glenn

    Passions


    • glenn shannon silver member
      November 6
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      thank you i really appreciate you dropping by and commenting too sweet hugs glenn x

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