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Sleepless

I wanna close my eyes,
and actually sleep for once.
One night without nightmares
one night, that's all I ask.
But is there really such a thing?
Will this get any better?
I hope so,
Because I'm tired of falling apart.

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  • Coloured Skies
    November 7

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    I can relate very much to this. The ending few lines strike out to me, I hope you're alright Powerful poem, short and simple - straight to the point. I enjoyed it but thought it was sad. So I hope you're okays.