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Digging for Kryptonite

You were my superman,
i was your heroin,
you were my saviour,
i was your job,
you saved my life,
i made yours harder,
or so it seems.

You hurt me bad,
time and again,
and now i'm filled with pain.

I want to try and hurt you,
as much as you hurt me.

I need to hear you scream in pain,
so that my life can be the same.

I'd like to find your weakness,
because i want to bring you down.

I want,
i need,
your kryptonite.

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240. Digging for Kryptonite

A contest entry

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  • Unbreakable3
    November 11, 2009

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    this is nice. i liked the way you used the title. and the piece really flowwed well! thank you for entering and best of luck! -unbreakable3