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When I Put My Head Down

It's late at night. Just getting
my baby girl to sleep. Crawling
into bed. Leaning against the head
bored. Homework on my lap. Studying
for my exams.

Hours pass and my eyes slowly
start to close. Drifting to sleep. Slowly
my body starts to slide under the covers.
The past comes back into my dreams. I want
to wake up but I can't

My head finally hits the pillow. I'm
tossing and turning. It's a nightmare
I want to wake up from. Waking up from
this horrible dream. I know that when I put
my head down my nightmare begins again.

Author notes

This is true.
I was almost in
tears as I wrote it.

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  • Tqop
    November 10

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    Girl, you are not alone! It'll be okay. I too had a nightmare not of my past, but it was scarey. And I had a dream about someone I thought I was over. It'll be okay. I'm here if you need me sweetie.

  • Wow this was an amzing poem you wrote here.
    I am just starting to write myself
    Great to have an amazing poet like you to
    teach me how to write.

  • Virginia Logsdon
    November 6
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    Gee! It made me feel sad!You really put feeling in this one!

  • This is really a great hearfelt write, and so personal. Ah, please dont cry. "Know that every time I smile, every time I sleep you are with me" thank you alot for entering! xxx