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wolf

My hunger grows
as blood starts to flow
And so the fangs start to grow.
I see you and you see me
Knowing how this could be.
Your beauty intrege's me
Your smell free's me.
@iercing's and tattoo's
Makes me wanna bite you,
Melting at the sight of you,
So I lip my lips and say
Sorry I'm not ready for this new game..
One year sobriety first isn't to lame.

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Feelings spoken between me and someone,lust and responsibility
Is hard.

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  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    November 26
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    Welcome To AllPoetry

    This is amazing the imagery and flow with perfectly together. I love the picture you painted within my curious mind. This is very creative and well penned. Keep on writing


  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 10

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    welcome to ap

    I really liek this piece, the imagery was great and i loved the flow too, amazing write and thanks for sharing, loved it.
    -penguin-


  • OnEhOuRoFdAyLiTe gold member
    November 6
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    Wrote this on my blackberry spelling isn't great and for some reason it copied three of this poem, will fix when I get to a comp