Chilled fingers fell and
crumbled with a hush-
misinterpreted for
complacent words
about love and trying to find your self.
Shadowed stains
creep across sagging shoulders
with a deceitful menace,
but your not here to see it;
the dark and its contagious bellows-
swallowing laughter and lights
with insensitive yawns.
Soft wisps are brushed back in a whisper
sleep,
darling
sleep.
Author notes
Chilled. Decietful.Contagious.Insensitive.Light.
A contest entry
- Quickie # 5 of 37! by Beautiful-N-Broken.
516 points, ended November 6, 7 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Terrific use of the word bank and brilliant job penning this. It's an amazing write. Thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest, and in all you do.
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about love and trying finding your self
do you mean 'about love and trying to find yourself?
this was way different than most of your writings but i liked how quiet and mysterious it was, and im assuming it was a word bank theme? i think you did well
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