Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Prayer-less

The deceitful call from echoing voices
Become insensitive chatter within my ears.
Prayers beckoning a jubilant light from above or beyond
Becomes chilled with emotional entropy
Mountains of fruitful glee seem contagious from afar
Like pregnant mothers expecting miracles,
I await the birth of an answered prayer.

Author notes

....

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Oh my goodness, this is just brilliant. I really enjoyed reading this and it really did speak to me. You did excellent with the word bank and came up with a masterpiece. Great writing...good luck in the contest and in all you do.