I will show you compassion,
for the world has shown you fear...
I will hold you close,
dry your every tear.
I will emit sunshine,
when you feel the rain.
I will comfort you, through
life's aches and pain.
Love is all around you,
just reach for the light.
Keep a smile on your face,
and things will be alright.
Author notes
Picture provided by contest host...
A contest entry
- Can You Show Those Lost How Love Is Shown by storiesuntold.
800 points, ended November 19, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Perfect. These words touch the reader with warmth and reassurance.
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Aww Julie
this poem brought a tear to my eye
a wonderful light piece of comfort to those who needs
Best wishes hun
Julie
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Oh this is so very beautiful. You did and excellent job on what she asked for in the contest. Oh it is so true though you poem expressed the beauty of loving compassion to the wounded heart. Your poem rhymed so well and the rhythm and flow was just perfect. To me this is just a golden write for sure.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Kelle Marie 
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Excellent write here
This says it all and to embrace another who fels lost this is he only way to reach them and never leave their side for most feel your actions but also feels it isnt real unless you stick with them through good and the bad
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Beauty~
Oh My Apple Pie~ this is a Beauty my Friend
and Love the Message You have woven
also the rhyme too
You Inspire with Your words~ Woot~
Bravo!
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice
Best wishes in this contest ~
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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Excellent
A wonderful take on the theme. So very creative. Best of luck in the contest
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