Prays are made
the tears that shed
the hope of one fall
One voice would cry
and other would fall
and dreams are broken
Pain hold down
and the sorrow
would take over
One day one
would find them
self, again
Author notes
contest and I love the song How to Save a Life
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TmFi2snLr7o
don't ask what with this okay...
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Awwwh, you have such beautiful poetry ^-^;
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errr... thanks ^^?
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nice write. I couldn't find the video but this can stand alone w/o the video being watched. You show great compassion in this. Sorrowful and powerful write.
Sharon
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thanks ^^
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Great write. You did an excellent job with this and I agree that is a great song. Thanks so much for sharing this here and good luck in all you do hun!!!!
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thanks ^^
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To retain our hope is the essence of leading a good and worthy life. And, as they say, faith is believing in things unseen. Good luck in the contest, Poet. 
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thanks ^^
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