Looking to the sky
Clouds cover the moon
Waiting for them to leave
So it will come to view
It fills the night
Full as can be
But it's so alone
Empty, like me
Fading with the night
I wonder what's next
The sun takes its place
And kills what was left
I laugh and smile
For we are nothing alike
I'm hollowed out
While it brings us life...
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I actually woke up the other day and witnessed the moon fading into the horizon and the sun coming up on the other side and it sparked an interest to what I witnessed...
What did you think
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I remember reading this recently. I think we even chatted about it. Is this the one that you sent me before you posted it?
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Yup this is the one I sent you. I made some minor changes to it, but it was only a matter of rearranging certain words and I took out one line completely to replace it with something I thought was a little better
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Oh wow!
That was something different! <3 It was simple, yet interesting! I see the full moon all the time now and it's beautiful to behold.
*comes back the next day* Forgot to finish this comment! lol Good job as always, my dear! <333
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nice poem i lyked it a lot
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Beautiful, I like the flow
<3 the last few lines
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hehe it's something simple, yet meaningful...at least to me anyways, but I'm glad you enjoyed it <3
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