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Lies of Loving and Hating Oneself

Lies are flowing out
of your mouth like a flood
You know not what you're about

I can't resist this doubt
All I can do is let loose the blood
Lies are flowing out

Blood flowing, my body becomes a drought
You fall in a pool of mud
You know not what you're about

Altogether you made me flout
at love, which is now a growing bud
Lies are flowing out

The bud of love begins to sprout
You walk over it with an awful thud
You know not what you're about

The unfairness of it makes me shout
You faint and behind my eyes stars bestud
Lies are flowing out
You know not what you're about

Author notes

This is a villanelle for English class... some of the rhymes, you can definitely tell that only used because it rhymes, just so you know.

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