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see me,once.

i need you to see me.
to feel my pain.
get under my skin,
pull me past my scars.
to see past my fasts.
to understand
my need for hunger.
to help me surrender.
to forget my faults,
and all those mistakes.
to take another look.
not only observe my face.
just see me
once.

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