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Tiny Wings

Tiny thought on wings of splendor,
messages delivered by heavenly sender.
In beauty of the angels sings,
love from God on butterfly wings.

When life seems more ebb than flow
and all I do is go go go.....
I take a moment to look around
in nature where life's joy abounds,

And when I feel I'm at my worst,
and God has put me last not first,
and all I want to do is cry.
God sends to me a butterfly.

Stained glass wings floating near,
remind me that I need not fear.
For while I face trials on this earth,
the time will come for life's rebirth.

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  • Scarlet x Stone
    November 9

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    Hey, this is a beautiful write, gentle and soft and peaceful. I feel like i want to read more of it, its beautiful xxx


    • whyspr gold member
      November 15
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      Thank you Scarlet, I saw that you had given me a beautiful shiney silver, and I had tome back and thank you, but not just for that but for the contest and for finding my poem beautiful.


  • isomuse silver member
    November 7

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    Love from God on butterfly's wings, indeed. This is quite lovely, whyspr! Isn't life all about the ebb and flow? What a great metaphor this is! Sometimes we flow; sometimes we anticipate the flow...but in the end, that's what we do...wait! Will we truly be there for life's rebirth??? Dear God, I hope so!


    • whyspr gold member
      November 15
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      Thank you my friend, I hope for rebirth too, for the peace of life lived in a gentle love.

  • hezakiah
    November 7

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    I agree; this is beautiful. A good poem for me to remember when I feel down. I like it all but especially the title and the opening two lines.


    • whyspr gold member
      November 15
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      Hezakiah, I am so honored you would be inspired to better feeling by words I wrote. Thank you


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 6

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    utterly beautiful my sweet ghost


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 6

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    Butterflies are sacred messengers, bearing wise words from those who have gone before us. This is a lovely and serene piece. Good luck in the contest, Poet.




  • michael thomas
    November 6

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    Your poems are always upbeat and positive. I like how you write.


    • whyspr gold member
      November 6
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      Thank you michael, I think Ive posted some dark ones too tho.

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