you are the last drop of white water that falls from mirror clouds, so full of currant electricity and the chaotic swirls of turbulence; and you toss and turn through troposphere as buttermilk dust melts away into oblivion. im sorry i cant catch you. you take in every facet with no defense and find that the only one that could choose to save you,
wont.
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you are the treble high and the bass down low;
the very solubility in the air pressure falling.
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you are the last drop to tumble from warm clouds, infected with pollution. you gravitate under strain and save each texture for a rainy day.
whoever told you falling is fun, isnt your friend.
Author notes
Currant: a small seedless raisin.
Rain drops form easier when there are ice crystals, hence a summer shower is full of pollution and greenhouse gases.
Prompt: http://soilerosion.net/image/raindrop.jpg
O h . m y . j u l i e t
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im sorry i cant catch you. you take in every facet with no defense and find that the only one that could choose to save you,
wont.
this is such a beautiful poem! such a lovely take on the prompt!!! thanks so much for entering and good luck!
claire -
i'm sorry let me change it to this:
http://soilerosion.net/image/raindrop.jpg
notify me if it still doesn't work. good luck.
claire
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