I was offered this light piece of something for which
there is no name, but I'd been told:
"Everyone likes it, it's good for you!"
And so...I try some of this contagious drug.
And, here I go! My head's a happy little twister
in danger of leaving my body, but is that so bad?
I'm on top of the world!-No, I OWN this world!
Call this tripping, call it high, or whatever, but
I really do believe I find myself liking this
jubilant little rush of blood to the brain
too clouded with ideas about tomorrow;
give my compliments to whoever created it!
This is quite possibly the most fruitful thing
anyone has ever become addicted to
...
Give me another hit of it-
and here I go again!
Author notes
Word bank words I used...: Call, Fruitful, Jubilant, Light and Contagious.
A contest entry
- Quickie # 5 of 37! by Beautiful-N-Broken.
516 points, ended November 6, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 1000 points, 1000 pws by Shadow Anonymised.
1000 points, ended November 23, 1080 entries
• next poem in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
Opinions! Thank you please!
Comments
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Great write and great use of the word bank, you did a wonderful job with it! Thank you so much for entering the contest, good luck in it and in all you do!
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Oh yay I got HM! Thank you! And thanks to all for the comments!
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There can never be too much optimism in the world. There are far too many who are inclined to throw a brick at every flower we may plant, but that should not ever prevent us from planting seeds. Good luck in the contest, Poet. 
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i love how optomistic i see this one as
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